Shoddy journalism #12

(Emphasis is mine, to show the mistakes)

1. Malaymail article: " ‘Like a plane turbine’: Witness tells of raging gas fire near Puchong, Putra Heights ". Sentence: " "Since yesterday was the first day of Raya, most of us were asleep but we were women up abruptly because we wanted find out what was causing the scorching heat and noise from the shaking of the iron grilles," "


2. The Rakyat Post article: " Parents Order SPM Retakes Despite 4 As: Student’s Engineering Dreams Hit Family Roadblock ". Sentence: " Despite scoring straight As in four subjects including Mathematics and English, and earning a B in History, the student faces mandatory retakes of science subjects they passed with lower grades – all due to unyielding parental pressure. "

"Straight As" means A for all subjects.

3. BBC article: " Trump's ceasefire pivot will have caused dismay in Kyiv and Europe ". Sentence: " Despite Europe's emerging role as Ukraine's principal military, economic and political backer, everyone knows that it will be difficult to guarantee Ukraine's future security cannot really be assured without the substantive backing of the US." 

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